Seeing the different drawings of tiguis for my contest, I wanted to draw agin my animal. But this time I drew the female of Tigui : a Tiguesse.
En voyant les différents dessins de tiguis pour mon concours, j'ai eu envie d'en redessiner un. Mais cette fois, j'ai dessiné la femelle du tigui : une tiguesse.
This image really popped for me in the preview made. That's a hard thing o accomplish. One way is to step away from the work (not backing away) and when you get about twenty feet away, turn and notice what you see. The critique was spot on, and very fair. The solution might be to run some lighter colors back along the top edge where the white stops. That would imply more shape to the flatness mentioned. Good luck, I like it. The rest of this critique is to fill in the need for one hundred words. just ignore this part. LOL NewYorkRod
I looked at the two photos that you used for references and I can see them easily in this image. Your color choice is pretty good, and the shapes are incredibly accurate. I do notice a few things that maybe need some improvement. The shading makes it a little difficult to see some of the edges of the cheetah and the trees. I know this may have been intentional but the picture looses some of its 'pop'. Specifically the hind end of the cheetah is a little flat. The pattern of the spot work is realistic which I really like to see. You didn't just throw on spots. Overall I would say it is pretty good.
NewYorkRod
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