Mirri and Behoka

let me just say, I absolutely adore your perspective.
this picture was definitely well thought out and I can't imagine how long you spent on it (longer than I have the patience for, I'm sure).

ok! so, lets get started!

the first thing I noticed was how you highlighted Mirri and Behoka. I assume you did so on purpose because of your lighting and the faded leaves floating around them. It looks cool and adds a great first impression to your picture, so thumbs up! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Big Grin)"/>

I do, however, have to agree with MugenGinga about the grass. You don't notice it at first so it isn't anything to panic about but if you look closer the grass does look like you rushed it. Though, I do not agree that it was caused by the way it was drawn. I think the real problem is the lighter grass you have in the foreground of the picture. It conflicts with the shadows you have casting in that direction and so, draws your attention to the grass.

The last suggestion I have to give would be about the mountains. They look like clones of each other. If you are ok with that style then awesome, you have nothing to change but if you were going for a more detailed look, the mountains should vary in size and shape.

(oh! and the only reason I put originality at a 4 is because I don't feel I have seen enough pictures in this sort of style to judge that.)

The clouds are amazing, your characters are lovely (I especially love the horses tail... hair... stuff and Mirri's cape), and your castle, the birds, and the sunrise are just gorgeous!